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Many people think that government should spend more income on free time activities and not on education to what extent do you agree or disagree

Many people think that government should spend more income on free time activities and not on education m3Oeq

In this contemporary, Era many efforts are taken by government to provide public facility is a section of society considered that instead of spending money on education authorities should spend only other activities. I partially agree with the aforementioned notion. I will discuss my view point in upcoming paragraphs to commence with the first and former us that children are Nation builder to demonstrate it because of guidance from experts. They can be become more creative therefore authorities should hire and experts in academic Institutions secondly lawmakers should improve the infrastructure because of latest technology and the method of teacher more and more pimples. encourages to study for instance,

In this contemporary, Era This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 efforts are taken
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 to provide public facility is a section of society considered that instead
 of spending money on education authorities should spend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 other activities. I partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the aforementioned notion. I will discuss my view point in upcoming paragraphs to commence with the first
 and former us that children are Nation builder to demonstrate it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of guidance from experts. They can be become
 more creative therefore
 authorities should hire and experts in academic Institutions secondly
 lawmakers should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the infrastructure This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".the latest
latest
 technology and the method of teacher more and more pimples. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEncourages
encourages
Did you mean "studying"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.studying
to study
for instance
, 