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local spendings in 2 decades

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The given three different pie charts demonstrates changings of some local spendings in somewhere for two decades between 1980 and 2000. Overall, the money which was spent on enviromental services was raising all this period. Moreover, higher education expense has been attractively high over the past two decades. In detail, K-12 education has also been declining on this eve. Thus, 25% of whole monetary was spent on K-12 education in 1980, however, in subsequent years this figure fell to 20 and 18, respectively. Futhermore, the money which spent on transportation was 16% in 1980 but in 1990 this number reduced remarkably to 6% and in 2000 the amount of money which is spent on transportation raised to 22%. In addition, expense of health and human resources was 14% in 1980 after a decade this number increased to 20% and in 2000 this percentage dropped to 10%/

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