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The diagram gives information about how to manufacture rainwater collected for the use of drinking water in the Australian town. Overall, it can be clearly seen that there are five main stages in the process beginning with setting up drains and ending with drinking water. The first step in the diagram is the household setting up drains for their own house to collect the rain which falls on the rooftop. Subsequently, the water is carried through a system by pipes to filter which are located under the ground then flow down to the container to storage. Afterward, it moves to another container where chemicals are added to be used for treatment to make the water clean enough for residents to use and drink. The process concludes with sending through pipes and leading back to the houses where the residents can use it for daily basic consumption such as: cooking, drinking, . . . .

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IELTS academic how to manufacture rainwater collected for the

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

154 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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