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ndicates various ways of accessing news in Canada and Australia

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The graph indicates various ways of accessing news in Canada and Australia. We can see that in Canada, the most preferred way is TV at 40%, closely followed by online news platforms at 36%. Print still seems to a significant part of people’s lives. However similar statistics can not be seen in Australia favouring online platform over TV. Online platform capture 52% of the this share followed by TV news at 37%. Print and radio have insignificant presence in Australia. Overall, we can say that the used of internet being the most common way to access news, other means like print ans radio have been suffering. The conditions differ in Canada with newspapers and radio still having some market presence.
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in Canada and Australia. We can
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that in Canada, the most preferred way is TV at 40%,
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platforms at 36%. Print
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at 37%. Print and radio have insignificant presence in Australia.

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of internet being the most common way to access
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, other means like print ans radio have been suffering. The conditions differ in Canada with newspapers and radio
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