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My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars.

My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars. N36Oq
My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars. They are living in modern houses and extremely modern interiors. In addition, the Internet is very popular among residents and they use it to study, make friends and play games. And finally, my hometown has used a lot of science and technology. It's really a big change that affects the development of my hometown
My hometown has
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changed
a lot. Most of them
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now
have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars. They are living in modern
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houses
and
extremely
modern interiors.
In addition
, the Internet is
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very
popular among
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residents and
they
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use
it to study,
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make
friends and play games. And
finally
, my hometown has
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used
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a lot of
science and technology. It's
really
a
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big
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change
that affects the development of my
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hometown

IELTS academic My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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