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My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars.

My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars. N36Oq
My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars. They are living in modern houses and extremely modern interiors. In addition, the Internet is very popular among residents and they use it to study, make friends and play games. And finally, my hometown has used a lot of science and technology. It's really a big change that affects the development of my hometown
My hometown has
changed
a lot. Most of them
now
have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars. They are living in modern
houses
and
extremely
modern interiors.
In addition
, the Internet is
very
popular among
residents and
they
use
it to study,
make
friends and play games. And
finally
, my hometown has
used
a lot of
science and technology. It's
really
a
big
change
that affects the development of my
hometown
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IELTS academic My hometown has changed a lot. Most of them now have cell phones and most have motorbikes, even cars.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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