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The maps show the current layout of one part of the small town of Springsby and its planned development.

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The maps show the current layout of one part of the small town of Springsby and its planned development. According to the data on the maps, it is planned to build two large shopping centers on a territory next to an existing residential complex. A bus station will also be built next to the school. Part of the park next to the lake will also be given over to a parking lot. For new construction, it will not be necessary to demolish old buildings, since the territory is empty. For new construction, it will not be necessary to demolish the old buildings, since the territory is empty. However, half of the park area will be occupied by a car park. In conclusion, it should be noted that the projects relate to the development of infrastructure around the main existing facilities, such as a school and a residential complex.
The maps
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current
layout of one part of the
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Springsby
and its planned development.

According to the data on the maps, it
is planned
to build two large shopping centers on a territory
next
to an existing residential complex. A bus station will
also
be built
next
to the school. Part of the park
next
to the lake will
also
be
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given
over to a parking lot.

For new construction, it will not be necessary to demolish
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old
buildings, since the territory is empty. For new construction, it will not be necessary to demolish the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
buildings, since the territory is empty.
However
, half of the park area will
be occupied
by a car park.

In conclusion
, it should
be noted
that the projects relate to the development of infrastructure around the main existing facilities, such as a school and a residential complex.
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