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movie genre preferences in a cinema according to age group

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The chart describes movie genre preferences in a cinema according to five age groups; 10-15, 16-20, 21-35. 36-55, and 56 and older. Overall, animation is the most favorable film type as it accounts for the highest viewers percentage among all. As shown in the chart, the genre that seems to be enjoyed by all groups is Action, although it only represents the lowest percentage of the population. Animation might be the type of film that is popular among children and becoming less favorable to adults, and even not watched by elderlies. As seen in the chart, the percentage gets fewer in older age groups. Similarly, Horror and thrillers is not consumed by elderlies as well. This genre is more enjoyed by children and teenagers than adults above 20 years old. Documentaries and Romantic are the most preferable film types for adults between 36 and 55 years old and not viewed by children in 10 to 15 years old. People in the 56 and above age group seem to like documentaries as much as those in the 21 to 35 age group. However, they are less into romance. Lastly, action is the only genre that is watched by all age groups. Teenagers and adults between 16 and 25 years old are the age groups who appear to be fascinated the most by this type of film.
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preferences in a cinema according to five
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age
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; 10-15, 16-20, 21-35. 36-55, and 56 and older.

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, animation is the most favorable film
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as it accounts for the highest
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percentage among all. As shown in the chart, the
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is Action, although it
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Documentaries and Romantic are the most preferable film
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between 36 and 55 years
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and not viewed by children in 10 to 15 years
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in the 56 and above
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seem to like documentaries as much as those in the 21 to 35
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