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The line chart provides information on the number of students from Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia and Singapore who studied in Australia between 1982 and 2000. Overall, the most outstanding feature of the line chart is that four Asian countries witnessed a substantial increase in students total in Australia over an eighteen-year period. While the highest number of Indonesian students studying abroad can be seen in 2000. It can be described in detail that Malaysian pupils were ranked the highest among four Asian countries with approximately 5, 000 students in Australia, while none came from three other countries at the beginning of period. The figure for Malaysia rose slightly, reaching 10, 000 students until 1994 and finally landed at roughly 18, 000 students, which was the lowest by the year 2000. By contrast, the number of international learners from Hong Kong and Indonesia quickly surpassed Malaysia in 1990 and 1993 respectively. As is illustrated by the chart, both Hong Kong, Singapore and Malaysia improved significantly reaching 18, 000 in 1998. Whereas there was a dramatic growth in the number of Indonesian students hit its peak in the same year, at almost 28, 000 students, followed by a sharp decrease to 23, 000, which was the highest in 2000.

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 from Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia and Singapore who studied in Australia between 1982 and 2000.

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 in 2000.

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 in Australia, while none came from three other countries at the beginning of period. The figure for Malaysia rose slightly
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students
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, which was the lowest by the year 2000. By contrast, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 of international learners from Hong Kong and Indonesia quickly
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 reaching 18, 000 in 1998. Whereas there was a dramatic growth in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 of Indonesian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
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 hit its peak in the same year, at almost 28, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
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, followed by a sharp decrease to 23, 000, which was the highest in 2000. 