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The table gives information about monthly sales of drinks at small café from January to April.

The table gives information about monthly sales of drinks at small café from January to April. GM3Dx
The table gives information about monthly sales of drinks at small café from January to April. It is clear that tea and coffee have the largest number at 270 in February. We can also see that cocktails are showed the lowest number at 90 in January and February. Overall, tea and coffee and juices’ sales are noticeably higher in January at 250 and 200. But ice drinks and cocktails are lower than them at 150 and 90. In February, changeability is not at ice drinks and cocktails. Tea and coffee have a slight rise at 270. But juices decrease in 190. However, demand on ice drinks, cocktails, juices increase in March at 190, 110, 210. It can be seen that the proportion of tea and coffee go down at 220. Only ice drinks has sharp rise at 230 in April. Out of the ice drinks, the rest of drinks have a slight increase tea and coffee at 180, juices at 200, cocktails at 100. Overall, tea and coffee are nearly the highest proportion of sales. Cocktails are always lower proportion than the rest of drinks. The proportion of sales changes into seasonal condition.
The table gives information about monthly
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sales
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drinks
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small
café from January to April. It is
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clear
that
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tea
and
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coffee
have the largest number at 270 in February. We can
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cocktails
are
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showed
the lowest number at 90 in January and February.

Overall
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tea
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coffee
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juices’
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sales
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noticeably
higher in January at 250 and 200.
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But
ice
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drinks
and
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cocktails
are lower than
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them
at 150 and 90.

In February, changeability is not at ice
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drinks
and
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cocktails
.
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Tea
and
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coffee
have a slight rise at 270.
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But
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juices
decrease in 190.

However
, demand on ice
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drinks
,
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cocktails
,
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juices
increase in March at 190, 110, 210. It can be
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seen
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proportion
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tea
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coffee
go down at 220.

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Only
ice
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drinks
has sharp rise at 230 in April. Out of the ice
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drinks
, the rest of
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drinks
have a slight increase
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tea
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coffee
at 180,
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juices
at 200,
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cocktails
at 100.

Overall
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tea
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coffee
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nearly
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proportion
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sales
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are always lower
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proportion
than the rest of
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drinks
. The
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proportion
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sales
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changes
into seasonal condition.
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IELTS academic The table gives information about monthly sales of drinks at small café from January to April.

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