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Money spend on different goods.write 150 words

Money spend on different goods. write 150 words Lbwx8
The bar graph illustrates the amount of money spend on five different consumer goods by UK and France in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that expenditure for both the countries was maximum on cars. It is also apparent that UK spend least amount of money on perfumes whereas in France it was cameras. Looking at the UK data in more detail, it is evident that expenditure on cars was stood at just above 450, 000, which is the highest value on this chart. The amount of money spend on computers and cameras was approximately 350, 000. Expenditure on books was about 400, 000, which is the second highest value on this chart and on perfumes it was about 150, 000, which is the lowest value on this chart. Turning to the France data, it can be seen that the amount of money spend on cars was exactly 400, 000 while for computers it was around 375, 000. Expenditure on books was stood at 300, 000. The proportion of expenditure on perfumes and cameras was 200, 000 and 150, 000 respectively.
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by UK and France in 2010.

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on perfumes whereas in France it was cameras.

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on computers and cameras was approximately 350, 000.
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on books was about 400, 000, which is the second highest value on this chart and on perfumes it was about 150, 000, which is the lowest value on this chart.

Turning to the France data, it can be
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on cars was exactly 400, 000 while for computers it was around 375, 000.
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