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modes of transport in the Cambridge in the year of 2008 and 2018

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The pie chart illustrate the information about the modes of transport in the two different year 2008 and 2018 in the city of Cambridge. Overall, the popular transport mode is car followed by buses in the year 2008. While the usage of other transport method in the year 2018 is well balanced. Around 3/4th of the people use bus and car to travel around the city where as the pre-dominant usage of buses can be observed in the year 2018, followed by the reduction of usage of car with around 20 percent. In opposite to it, the less usage of mode can be considered as walking which is around 11% and slightly increase up to 25 % in the year 2018. The usage of bicycle is increased to 30 percent which is around 17% in the year 2008. In conclusion, the major feature of the chart is that there is well balanced usage of transport mode in the comparison with the year 2008.
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IELTS academic modes of transport in the Cambridge in the year of 2008 and 2018

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