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Meadowside Village and Fonton development over 1962, 1985 and the present day.

Meadowside Village and Fonton development over 1962, 1985 and the present day. 7WP8y
The maps illustrate the development of Meadowside village and Fonton, which is a neighbouring town, during the periods of 1962, 1985 and the present. Overall, it is evident that, Meadowside has grown from a village to an urban city, whilst, merging with Fonton which has also increased in land area considerably. Additionally, the expansion and growth of Meadowside and Fonton, have directly resulted in the introduction of new infrastructure facilities, recreational areas and residential suburbs. In 1962, Meadowside village, which comparatively inherited a small land extent, only had a narrow road stretching from the west towards the northeast of the land. Fonton, on the other hand, had a railway path crossing the land from the east end to the northwest. Moving on to 1985, it can be established that Meadowside has significantly increased in size with dedicated areas for a leisure complex, housing estate and a super-store in close proximity to the main road. The main road has also developed from a narrow single-way road to a noticeably wider, two-way road with an additional street connecting the neighbouring land, Fonton. The present-day map clearly demonstrates, the merger between the two regions with a large Hotel constructed just north of the railway station, which is situated adjacent to the railway line. Another striking development is the business park located towards the south end of the vast land with the entrance facing the main road just above.
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Meadowside
village and
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Fonton
, which is a
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neighbouring
town, during the periods of 1962, 1985 and the present.
Overall
, it is evident that,
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Meadowside
has grown from a village to an urban city, whilst, merging with
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Fonton
which has
also
increased in
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land
area
considerably
.
Additionally
, the expansion and growth of
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Meadowside
and
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Fonton
, have
directly
resulted in the introduction of new infrastructure facilities, recreational areas and residential suburbs. In 1962,
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Meadowside
village, which
comparatively
inherited a
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small
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land
extent,
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only
had a narrow
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road
stretching from the west towards the northeast of the
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land
.
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Fonton
,
on the other hand
, had a railway path crossing the
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land
from the east
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end
to the northwest. Moving on to 1985, it can
be established
that
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Meadowside
has
significantly
increased in size with dedicated areas for a leisure complex, housing estate and a super-store in
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close proximity
to the main
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road
. The main
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road
has
also
developed from a narrow single-way
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road
to a
noticeably
wider, two-way
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road
with an additional street connecting the
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neighbouring
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land
,
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Fonton
. The present-day map
clearly
demonstrates, the merger between the two regions with a large Hotel constructed
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just
north of the railway station, which
is situated
adjacent to the railway line. Another striking development is the business park located towards the south
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end
of the vast
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land
with the entrance facing the main
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road
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just
above.
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