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student room for the single student and for the two students at an Australian University.

student room for the single student and for the two students at an Australian University. nd19o
The plan below illustrates the student room for the single student and for the two students at an Australian University. Overall, the cost of the room for one student was $200/week, compared to two students which is just $350/week. some of the common things in both rooms were Bed, Study Desk Television, Bathroom, Stove and sink. In terms of two student room, it is of 6X4M. It has two beds and study desks are just beside them. Each bed room has Windows. This room occupied with Table and chairs, which are not present in single person room. It has two cupboards placed at opposite to bed. The room has no television in it. On the other hand, one person room is of same length but the width of the room is only 2. 5M. It has only single bed, Study Desk is located adjacent to Bed and in opposite of Study Desk Television is present. Finally some basic things like sink, stove bathroom were present in both rooms.
The plan below illustrates the
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for the single
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and for the two
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at an Australian University.

Overall
, the cost of the
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for one
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was $200/week, compared to two
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which is
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$350/week.
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some of the
common things in both
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were
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Bed
,
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Study
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Desk
Television, Bathroom, Stove and sink.

In terms of two
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room
, it is of
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6X4
M. It has two
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and
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study
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are
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beside them. Each
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has Windows. This
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occupied with Table and chairs, which are not present in single person
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. It has two cupboards placed at opposite to
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bed
. The
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has no television in it.

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, one person
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is of same length
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the width of the
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is
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2. 5M. It has
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single
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,
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Study
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is located
adjacent to
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Bed
and in opposite of
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Television is present.
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Finally
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basic things like sink, stove bathroom were present in both
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IELTS academic student room for the single student and for the two students at an Australian University.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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