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The given diagram illustrates the project of a medical center in 2008 and in 2010.

The given diagram illustrates the project of a medical center in 2008 and in 2010. Ol6my

According to the diagram, in 2008, the main entrance was opened to the waiting room that led towards to the north side. In the waiting room, staff office and reception were there. To the right side of the waiting room, laboratory was opened which also had access from the waiting room. On the northwest side, treatment room was opened. From the right side of the treatment room, there were three doctor's office which also opened the door to the corridor. In 2010, looking towards to the southwest ward an education room and mother and child room were constructed. Pharmacy was designed on the southeast side behind the laboratory which also opened the door to corridor. Interestingly, doctor's office turned into small and converted to four instead of three office. Store room was added to the northeast side just after doctor's room. Overall, it is manifest from the diagram that, there were lots of changes were made in just two years.

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In 2010, looking towards to the southwest ward an education You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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 and mother and child You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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were constructed
. Pharmacy was designed
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office
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 and converted to four instead
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. Store You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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added
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changes
were made
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just
 two years. 