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Meadowside village and Fontan

Meadowside village and Fontan 6dMP0
The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and Fontan, which is a neighboring town, have developed over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and the present). Overall, Meadowside village increased in size and has become Meadowside Suburb as it merged together with Fontan. Furthermore, there have been significant changes in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period given. In 1962, both Meadowside and Fontan were completely separate with no roads or rail connecting them. While Fontan had a railway line running through it to the north, Meadowside, located to the west of the Fontan, only had a small road from the west. By 1985, there was considerable growth in the size of Meadowside village and Fontan. The small road in Meadowside village had been converted into a main road and was also extended to the east to connect with Fontan. Meadowside, moreover, had also developed a housing estate in the west, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the south. Currently, both Meadowside, which is now a suburb, and Fontan are joined. The railway line, which runs through Fontan, has been extended to the west where a train station has been built. To the north of the station, a hotel has been constructed and opposite the station, to the south, there is now a business park.
The maps illustrate how
Meadowside
village
and
Fontan
, which is a neighboring town, have developed over three
different
time periods (1962, 1985 and the present).

Overall
,
Meadowside
village
increased in size and has become
Meadowside
Suburb as it merged together with
Fontan
.
Furthermore
, there have been significant
changes
in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period
given
.

In 1962, both
Meadowside
and
Fontan
were completely separate with no
roads
or rail connecting them. While
Fontan
had a railway line running through it to the north,
Meadowside
, located to the west of the
Fontan
,
only
had a
small
road
from the west.

By 1985, there was considerable growth in the size of
Meadowside
village
and
Fontan
. The
small
road
in
Meadowside
village
had
been converted
into a main
road
and was
also
extended to the east to connect with
Fontan
.
Meadowside
,
moreover
, had
also
developed a housing estate in the west, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the south.

Currently
, both
Meadowside
, which is
now
a suburb, and
Fontan
are
joined
. The railway line, which runs through
Fontan
, has
been extended
to the west where a train station has
been built
. To the north of the station, a hotel has
been constructed
and opposite the station, to the south, there is
now
a business park.
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