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Map-The side of a school in 2024 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024

Map-The side of a school in 2024 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 Qw7Dx
The maps illsutrates the comparison between the layout of a school in 2004 and the revolution project of the school site in 2024. Overall, the site of this school has undergone several changes including the sports field is predicted to make way for school building 3, the path is going to join three school buildings, the construction of car park 2 linking to main road. This school will have a large number of students. In 2004, the school building 1 was opposite the school building 2 by the path from main entrance to sports field. By 2024, the emergence of school building 3 will turn into sports field. Furthermore, the path will be repaired to connect these buildings only. Another noticeable change worthy is that the car park 2 will be built behind the school building 3 and next to the sports field. Moreover, the site of this school will have a new road from the main entrance to the car park 2.
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the comparison between the layout of a
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school
in 2004 and the revolution project of the
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site in 2024.

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, the site of this
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has undergone several
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changes
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sports
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field
is predicted
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way for
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school
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3, the path is going to
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join
three
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school
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buildings
, the construction of car park 2 linking to main road. This
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will have
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a large number of
students.

In 2004, the
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school
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building
1 was opposite the
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school
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2 by the path from main entrance to
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sports
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field
. By 2024, the emergence of
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school
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building
3 will turn into
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sports
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field
.
Furthermore
, the path will
be repaired
to connect these
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buildings
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only
.

Another noticeable
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change
worthy is that the car park 2 will
be built
behind the
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3 and
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sports
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field
.
Moreover
, the site of this
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will have a new road from the main entrance to the car park 2.
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IELTS academic Map-The side of a school in 2024 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024

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