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Three countries' approaches to removing harmful waste

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the pie charts compare the three countries namely Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of different measures are used for each coutries of harmful waste treatment. It is clear that the Republic of Korea is the country with the highest proportion of waste recycling. While underground is considered the most common use in both Sweden and the UK. In the UK and Sweden, buried in harmful waste in the ground is the most common form of remove account for 82% and over a half of its waste treatment respectively. On the other part, Korea uses recycled as the main method of remove, making up approximately 70% of the total. Sweden uses a 20% fire method for waste treatment tiwce mora than in Korea a massive 9% burn approach but just 2% of waste harmful buried in the UK. As for the two new methods are not used in Korea and Sweden, stands at 8% each, chemical appearance and dumping at the sea in UK, whereas there are just three main treatments in the other two countries.
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that the Republic of Korea is the country with the highest proportion of
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recycling. While underground
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in both Sweden and the UK.

In the UK and Sweden, buried in harmful
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in the ground is the most common form of remove account for 82% and over a half of its
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waste
treatment
respectively
. On the other part, Korea
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uses
recycled as the main method of remove, making up approximately 70% of the total.

Sweden
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a 20% fire method for
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treatment
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mora
than in Korea a massive 9% burn approach
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2% of
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harmful buried in the UK. As for the two new methods are not
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in Korea and Sweden, stands at 8% each, chemical appearance and dumping at the sea in UK, whereas there are
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three main treatments in the other two countries.
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IELTS academic Three countries' approaches to removing harmful waste

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177 words
6.0
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