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Map, summarise the information

Map, summarise the information 6NYnG
Given is a map illustrating the town plan of Garlsdon. There are two potential regions for setting up the supermarket. It is evident from the information provided that the new supermarket will be built either in southern or the north western part of the town. The former one is located in the town centre, where industry region is nearby, and the latter one is in the countryside, where it is in close proximity to the Hindon. As for the one in town centre, the location is closer to the industry and it is the hub that connects Bransdon, Hindon and Cransdon via main roads. It is also noteworthy to point out that both locations are connected by railway. While the main roads are relatively close to the supermarket in the countryside, the one in the town center does not provide traffic zone, meaning that only railway can reach to the destination.
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Given
is a map illustrating the
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town
plan of
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Garlsdon
. There are two potential regions for setting up the supermarket.

It is evident from the information provided that the new supermarket will
be built
either in southern or the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
north western
part of the
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town
. The former one
is located
in the
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town
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centre
, where industry region is nearby, and the latter one is in the countryside, where it is in
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close proximity
to the
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Hindon
. As for the one in
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town
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centre
, the location is closer to the industry and it is the hub that connects
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Bransdon
,
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Hindon
and
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Cransdon
via main roads.

It is
also
noteworthy to point out that both locations
are connected
by railway. While the main roads are
relatively
close to the supermarket in the countryside, the one in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
center does not provide traffic zone, meaning that
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only
railway can reach to the destination.
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IELTS academic Map, summarise the information

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3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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