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the bar chart depicts how many times when people went to restaurants to eat fast food in the USA over the period of 10 years from 2003 to 2013, split into 5 categories. overall people who ate one a week and those who ate once or twice a month had the highest percentage, while people who ate every day or did not eat absolutely had the lowest proportion. In2003, the proportion of people who ate every day was about 4% as opposed to roughly 3% in 2006 and 2013. At 5%, people who Never Ate in restaurants in 2003 compared to the same percentage (about 4%) in 2006 and 2013. Citizens who ate several times a week were almost 16% in 2003 while they increased to exactly 20% in 2006 before dipping to just over 15% in 2013. People who ate a few times s year had the same percentage in 2006 and 2013 (exactly 15%) while they were only about 13% in 2003. People who ate once a week were about 30% in 2003, while they rose to approximately 33% in 2006 before reducing to about 27% in 2013. In 2013, people who ate once or twice a month climbed to nearly 33% compared to exactly to 25% and 30% in 2006 and 2003 respectively.
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went to restaurants to eat
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food in the USA over the period of 10 years from 2003 to 2013, split into 5 categories.

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overall
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one a week and those
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once or twice a month had the highest percentage, while
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every day or did not eat
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every day was about 4% as opposed to roughly 3% in 2006 and 2013. At 5%,
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in restaurants in 2003 compared to the same percentage (about 4%) in 2006 and 2013. Citizens
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several times a week were almost 16% in 2003 while they increased to exactly 20% in 2006
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over 15% in 2013.

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a few times s year had the same percentage in 2006 and 2013 (exactly 15%) while they were
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about 13% in 2003.
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once a week were about 30% in 2003, while they rose to approximately 33% in 2006
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reducing to about 27% in 2013. In 2013,
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once or twice a month climbed to
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