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Map of island before and after construction of tourist facilities

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The two maps shown below depicts the transformation of an island for the tourist facilities. Overall, it shows the construction of restaurant, reception, accommodation and the pier is built in a way that it would be convenient for the visitors. To begin with, the entrance of the island has a pier by the shore which leads straight to the reception that is loacated in between the parallel two groups of cottages. Furthermore, there is a roadway connecting from the pier to the reception and further continues towards the restaurant. In conclusion, as it is created in a bit more than walkable 100 meters, it is suitable for the travelers as there is a beach for them to stop by for some sunbathing and swimming. On top of that, it is subsequently close to one of the groups of the houses.
The two maps shown below depicts the transformation of an island for the tourist facilities.
Overall
, it
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shows
the construction of restaurant, reception, accommodation and the pier
is built
in a way that it would be convenient for the visitors.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, the entrance of the island has a pier by the shore which leads straight to the reception
that is
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loacated
in between the parallel two groups of cottages.
Furthermore
, there is a roadway connecting from the pier to the reception and
further
continues towards the restaurant.

In conclusion
, as it
is created
in a bit more than walkable 100 meters, it is suitable for the travelers as there is a beach for them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
by for
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some
sunbathing and swimming.
On top of that
, it is
subsequently
close to one of the groups of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
.

IELTS academic Map of island before and after construction of tourist facilities

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  American English
3 paragraphs
140 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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