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The map shows in 1990 and present day

The map shows in 1990 and present day 0a8Yl

The maps illustrate developments which took place in the university sport course during a period from 1990 to the present day. Overall a clear link can be drawn between two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely verdant to a main expense of courts. From a development perspective, on the west of the University dividing sports courts into two distinct sections. almost all buildings and parks were demolished and instead basketball court, as well as a giant tennis court, was constructed. To the east of the University, a changing room was built in the area. Moreover, an indoor pool sprang up around the cafe. Further development was the building of changing room. the tennis court was removed instead of the fitness centre was manufactured.

The maps illustrate developments which took place in the university sport course during a period from 1990 to the present day.

Overall
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 link can be drawn
 between two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely
 verdant to a main expense of courts.

From a development perspective, on the west of the University dividing sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 into two distinct sections.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlmost
almost
 all buildings and parks were demolished
 and instead
 basketball You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
, as well
 as a giant tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
, was constructed
. To the east of the University, a changing room was built
 in the area.

Moreover
, an indoor pool sprang up around the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
.

Further
 development was the building of changing room. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
was removed
instead
 of the fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
was manufactured
. 