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The graph illustrates 3 The graph below shows the consumption of 3 fast foods from 1970 to 1990

The graph illustrates 3 The graph below shows the consumption of 3 fast foods from 1970 to 1990 ew0ap

The given line graph compares the expenditure of fast food in 3 categories over two decades between 1970 and 1990. Units are measured in grams. It can be clearly seen that fish&chips is likely to be the most consumed food. In addition, there is an upward trend in the amount of fish & chips and pizza consumption, however the figure of hamburger spending decrease slightly during the period. The first striking feature observed from the graph is that the amount of pizza stood at more than 300 grams. This meant that it had the highest consumption of three food in 1970. After a while, having went down marginally by about 90grams in 1980, it then maintained the same level the last decade. By contrast, at the beginning, the consumption of fish&chips and hamburger relatively stood at 90 and 30, after that both of them witnessed a slight increase by 60 in the first decade. Henceforth, fish&chips ascended linearly and the amount of it rose slightly over 5 times compares with the previous, and hit its peak of 500. Whereas, hamburger's figure rose slightly to just over 100 grams and then it undergo a sharp growth by approximately 200 grams in the end of the period.

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fish&chips
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 in 1980, it then maintained the same level the last decade.

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fish&chips
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