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Map comparison on current and planned airport

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The given plans illustrate site of current and planned refurbishment of Southwest airport, which will start next year. Overall, the planned airport will be a large site than current one, which will include new areas. However, two parts of arrival and departure is remained same, although it will be constructed new top area, which will separate to two parts, therefore it will increase eight to eighteen gates. Currently, it has two walkways, but planned site will have sky trains. Now walkways are made in the left corner, while it is planned to build sky trains in the middle, which will provide more fast service. Now departure area is included café and check-in, however refurbishment will include bag drop with the other two. Previously, arrival is not consisted any parts, but planned site will be contained ATM, car hire and another café area. In conclusion, airport will be modified hugely to produce comfortable and effective service to customers.
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plans illustrate
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current
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refurbishment of Southwest airport, which will
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start
next
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, the
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airport will be a large
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than
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current
one, which will include new areas.

However
, two parts of arrival and departure
is remained
same, although it will
be constructed
new top area, which will separate to two parts,
therefore
it will increase eight to eighteen gates.
Currently
, it has two walkways,
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but
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planned
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site
will have sky trains.
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Now
walkways
are made
in the
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left
corner, while it is
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planned
to build sky trains in the middle, which will provide more
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fast
service.

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Now
departure area
is included
café and
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check
-in,
however
refurbishment will include bag drop with the other two. Previously, arrival is not consisted any parts,
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but
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planned
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will
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ATM, car hire and another café area.

In conclusion
, airport will
be modified
hugely
to produce comfortable and effective service to customers.
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IELTS academic Map comparison on current and planned airport

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157 words
6.0
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