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comparison noise 4 categories - line

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The provided line graph makes a comparison of the complaints about noise from 4 different categories including road works, factories, traffic noise and household to Environmental health authorities in Newtown over a period of 16 years, commencing from 1980. From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that while road works, factories, and traffic noise witnessed an upward tendency, domestic/household was inversely correlated, in which there was a sixth plummet in domestic data and a two-fold increase in the remaining ones. In 1996, road works was at the leading position and by far superior to others after witnessing a dramatic rise to roughly 1200 complaints. At the same time, the similarity could be also seen in factories and traffic noise, with their peaks at around 700 and 600 complaints respectively. Domestic noise, on the contrary, decreased annually prior to touching the nadir to just below 100 complaints. By 1980, most people had complained about the domestic noise, conversely this was the lowest year of receiving factory noise complaints, only 400 complaints had been registered. In the interim, road works and traffic noise started at 500 and 300 complaints respectively then remained unchanged 4 years later, before gradually declining in 1986 followed by growth till the end of the period.
The provided line graph
makes
a comparison of the
complaints
about
noise
from 4
different
categories including
road
works,
factories
,
traffic
noise
and household to Environmental health authorities in
Newtown
over a period of 16 years, commencing from 1980.

From an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that while
road
works,
factories
, and
traffic
noise
witnessed an upward tendency, domestic/household was
inversely
correlated, in which there was a sixth plummet in domestic data and a two-fold increase in the remaining ones.

In 1996,
road
works was at the leading position and by far superior to others after witnessing a dramatic rise to roughly 1200
complaints
. At the same time, the similarity could be
also
seen
in
factories
and
traffic
noise
, with their peaks at around 700 and 600
complaints
respectively
. Domestic
noise
,
on the contrary
, decreased
annually
prior to touching the nadir to
just
below 100 complaints.

By 1980, most
people
had complained about the domestic
noise
,
conversely
this was the lowest year of receiving
factory
noise
complaints
,
only
400
complaints
had
been registered
. In the interim,
road
works and
traffic
noise
started
at 500 and 300
complaints
respectively
then remained unchanged 4 years later,
before
gradually
declining in 1986 followed by growth till the
end
of the period.
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IELTS academic comparison noise 4 categories - line

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