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Chinese students studied within four years

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The line graph describes information about the different types of courses that millions of Chinese students studied within four years. Overall, it provided the clear information that the undergraduate courses were obviously highest among the four types from 2008 to 2012. Conversely, literacy courses were not much needed popular with Chinese students within four years. Regarding undergraduate courses in 2008, about 17 million students enrolled on the course, which was gradually increased at the end of the period. On the other hand, as for postgraduates and literacy courses, starting at the same point in 2008 and online courses, similar number of students enrolled them. But online and postgraduates students steadily increased and in 2012, the number of online students reached to 5 millions, difference by 2 millions compared to postgraduates. However, the students of literacy started with the same as postgraduates but the literacy students showed a downward trend from 2008 to 2010 and it gradually improved to one million in 2012.
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studied within four years.

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,
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literacy
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were not
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much needed
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students
within four years.

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courses
in 2008, about 17
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million
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students
enrolled on the
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course
, which was
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postgraduates
and
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literacy
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, starting at the same point in 2008 and online
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online and
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postgraduates
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steadily
increased and in 2012, the number of online
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reached to 5
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millions
, difference by 2
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compared to
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postgraduates
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literacy
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showed
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IELTS academic Chinese students studied within four years

Academic
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4 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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