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Many children should be encouraged to read books

Many children should be encouraged to read books ORqVM
Parents should play an important role in inspiring children to increase reading time. Personally, I think reading books teaches children about communication, improve their vocabulary skills, and gives information about the world around them for social and educational reasons. First of all, it is generally believed that reading can change life, because it helps undestand the world better. In other words, it allows to see the world outside comfort zone. Other clear example, is reading can help put you in someone else shoes, to get inside their heads and experience the things they have. The more understand someone, the more you can tailor your communication what you need. Through reading books, children creat meaning the world, become more empathetic, and experience different times and culture. Secondly, another very convincing argument in favour of reading is that it improves writing, analizing and creating. Once the child has collected enough vocabulary automaticly his communication skills and self-confidence will increase. I know from the experience, when I was a little girl, my father brought me a book. It was about adventure of a bird. Naturally, I was shy, but after reading some books I began talking more and more, trying to use nice words while communicating. While you are reading you feel not so alone. Talking everything into considiration it is clear, that children should be engaged to read books, because it helps understand the world better. Therefore, I strongly believe that perents help their children to choose book in their interest.
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inside their heads and experience the things they have. The more understand someone, the more you can tailor your communication what you need. Through
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IELTS academic Many children should be encouraged to read books

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