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The table compares the amount of electricity produced using five different sources over a period of 4 years.

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The table compares the amount of electricity produced using five different sources over a period of 4 years. Looking from an overall perspective, Hydroelectric power was by far the most important means of electricity over a period shown, however, the solar power was the lowest in each year. In 2009, Hydroelectric source produced 3329 TWh, solar source shows 21TWh of electricity. Wind and Bio- mass produce the same level of electricity by around 290TWh. Geothermal source was 67, 4TWh. Geothermal and wind increases approximately 70, 4 and 534 through the year. With regard to, Hydroelectric and bio- mass rise to 366. 4 and 362. 2. Generally, the solar source indicated the large of rise from 21 to 104. 5TWh.
The table compares the amount of
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over a period of 4 years. Looking from an
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over a period shown,
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, the solar power was the lowest in each year. In 2009, Hydroelectric
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produced 3329
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21TWh of
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. Wind and Bio- mass produce the same level of
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by around 290TWh. Geothermal
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was 67, 4TWh. Geothermal and wind increases approximately 70, 4 and 534 through the year. With regard to, Hydroelectric and bio- mass rise to 366. 4 and 362. 2.
Generally
, the solar
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indicated the large of rise from 21 to 104. 5TWh.

IELTS academic The table compares the amount of electricity produced using five different sources over a period of 4 years.

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