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The diagram below shows the proposed town.

The diagram below shows the proposed town. Ewml3

The following plan illustrates the structures that are planned to be built in a town. First of all, it can be seen that there are four main roads from north, south, east and west that conjoined at the center, in the center there are two parking areas in the down left corner and upper right corner as well as the two bus stops one is next to the parking which is on the upper right, and the other one is in the opposite of the parking that is in down left corner. Around the centre, there will be housing buildings circled by the ring roads. Then in the outer area of the town, there are housingss in northeast, east, southwest, and west. In addition, the northwest and southeast side of the town are seperated for industry. In the southwest housing, there is a recreational area and there are four other recreational areas which are in the southwest and northeast of the town center.

The following plan illustrates the structures that are planned
 to be built
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are four main roads from north, south, east and west that conjoined at the center, in the center there are two parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 in the down This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner and upper right corner as well
 as the two bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 one is next
 to the parking which is on the upper right, and the other one is in the opposite of the parking that is
 in down This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner. Around the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, there will be housing buildings circled by the ring roads. Then in the outer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
, there are Possible spelling mistake found.housings
housingss
 in northeast, east, southwest, and west. In addition
, the northwest and southeast side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 are Possible spelling mistake found.separated
seperated
 for industry. In the southwest housing, there is a recreational You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and there are four other recreational You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 which are in the southwest and northeast of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 center. 