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The given chart illustrates the percentage of Australians who consuming tea in the last four weeks in five differents cities of Australia

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The given chart illustrates the percentage of Australians who consuming tea in the last four weeks in five differents cities of Australia named Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Horbart. Overall, it is clearly to see that Horbart take the top proportion of people interested in going to café for coffee, tea and people there prefer to buy instant coffee rather than fresh coffee in all cities. To begin with Sydney and Melbourne, more than 60% of citizen of each city went to a café for coffee and tea. Nearly half of people in Melbourne had a habit of buying instant coffee, which was 5% higher than the figure for Sydney’ residents. Both cities were almost equal in percentage of people purchasing fresh tea which 43% in Sydney and 42% in Melbourne. With the three remaining cities, 50% to 54% of people from the last three cities were interested in consuming instant coffee. The percentage of people prefer buying fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide were reported at the same level at 34%, while the figure for Horbart was a bit higher at 46%. At the same time, the largest proportion of Horbart’s people liked to go to caffe for coffee and tea, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide reported in 53% and 50% respectively.
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in Melbourne had a habit of buying instant
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With the three remaining
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in Brisbane and Adelaide
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the percentage of Australians who consuming tea in the last four weeks in five differents cities of Australia

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