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look at the pictures, which show the process of making cherry jam. Complete the sentences with a verb from the box in the correct form

look at the pictures, which show the process of making cherry jam. Complete the sentences with a verb from the box in the correct form E3qbR
This diagram illustrated how cherry is produced from the fresh fruits. There are nine main stages in the process, beginning at picking up and ending at labeling on jars. First, the sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaken to get the cherries. Then, the cherries are collected and are transported to the processing plant where jam is produced. Next, the leaves and stems are removed to get real cherries. All of selected cherries are washed by water. The next stage is to taken the stone out of the middle of the cherry by the professional machine. So the stone and cherries are separated. The cherries are cooked and extra ingredients: sugar, pectin, lemon juice are added. After that, the quality controllers check the completed jam to ensure the registered product standard. The finally stage is to put jam into the jars and label it. Now, it is ready to distribute to supermarket.
This diagram illustrated how cherry
is produced
from the fresh fruits. There are nine main stages in the process, beginning at picking up and ending at labeling on jars.

First
, the sheet
is spread
on the ground and the tree
is shaken
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
. Then, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
are collected
and
are transported
to the processing plant where jam
is produced
.
Next
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
and stems
are removed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
. All of selected
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
are washed
by water. The
next
stage is
Did you mean "to take"?
to taken
the stone out of the middle of the cherry by the professional machine.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
the stone and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
are separated
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cherries
are cooked
and extra ingredients: sugar, pectin, lemon juice are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
. After that, the quality controllers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the completed jam to ensure the registered product standard. The
finally
stage is to put jam into the jars and label it.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, it is ready to distribute to supermarket.
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IELTS academic look at the pictures, which show the process of making cherry jam. Complete the sentences with a verb from the box in the correct form

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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