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Local government expenditure

Local government expenditure PR8QX
The pie charts describes the use of capital by government on various sectors including education, health, pension, transport and many others in years 2010 and 2015. Overall, in both the years the maximum money was invested in literacy and the minimum expenditure was done in transport, culture, and leisure. The significant change can be seen in defense and welfare schemes. In regard to the data provided by the survey of 2010 and 2015 the expense on education and defense area have been dropped by 3 percent and the healthcare also suffered the fall of 1 proportion while the welfare department have experienced the raise of 5 percent. Moreover, commerce have also increased because of increase in 5% proportion which is double than before. The allocations of pension remained 19 in both years also culture and leisure did not change its fund whereas transport funds faced downfall from 2% to 1% in five years (2010 to 2015 respectively).
The pie charts
describes
the
use
of capital by
government
on various sectors including education, health, pension, transport and
many
others in years 2010 and 2015.

Overall
, in both the years the maximum money
was invested
in literacy and the minimum expenditure
was done
in transport, culture, and leisure. The significant
change
can be
seen
in defense and welfare schemes.

In regard to the data provided by the survey of 2010 and 2015 the expense on education and defense area have
been dropped
by 3 percent and the healthcare
also
suffered the fall of 1 proportion while the welfare department have experienced the raise of 5 percent.
Moreover
, commerce have
also
increased
because
of increase in 5% proportion which is
double
than
before
.

The allocations of pension remained 19 in both years
also
culture and leisure did not
change
its fund whereas transport funds faced downfall from 2% to 1% in five years (2010 to 2015
respectively
).

IELTS academic Local government expenditure

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