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The graph below illustrates the data on research into renewable sources in four countries from 1975 to 2000

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The line graph depicts the data for spending dollars on research of renewable energy in Switzerland, Denmark, Spain and UK from 1975 to 2000. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the highest amount for research was by Switzerland whereas the lowest was spent by UK. To begin with, the citizens of Switzerland had spent an amount of $1 between five years from 1975 and 1980. After 1980 they had continuously spent more on research into renewable energy. However, the people of Denmark had spent dollars 1. 5 upto 1990. After that, they spent more from 1995 to 2000. Furthermore, the amount spent by the individuals of Spain into the research of renewable energy began from origin and in the last year they had spent slightly more. The graph of UK had shown fluctuation in spending an amount for research by individuals.
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of renewable energy in Switzerland, Denmark, Spain and UK from 1975 to 2000.
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was by Switzerland whereas the lowest was
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by UK. To
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into renewable energy.
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by the individuals of Spain into the
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of renewable energy began from origin and in the last year they had
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slightly
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IELTS academic The graph below illustrates the data on research into renewable sources in four countries from 1975 to 2000

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