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The table below shows the percentages of female workforce in five countries

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The data provides information on how many women in five different nations work at the factories and shops. Overall, it can be seen that the most females work at the stores more than manufactories; however, American and Egyptian women have a larger group in the plants more than the shop. The biggest difference of working in 2 workplaces is found in Australia by 16 percent. In the meanwhile, the different number of Koreans and Indonesians work at both of plants and shops by eleven per cent and nine per cent, respectively. On the other hand, there are a large number of females working in factories compared to shops in 2 different countries: the United States and Egypt. The percentage of woman workers in the United States presents a dramatic difference by 14 per cent: 42% at the manufactories and 28% at the stores. Whilst Egyptians, who work in two different workplaces, different modestly by one per cent.

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