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Literacy rate by region and gender 20111

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The bar chart shows literacy rate by region and gender 2011. The bar chart show the literacy rate between mens and womens by regions and gender 2011 which countries biggest percentage and lowest percentage. Countries mens and womens between literacy being compared. The colour of green its mens and the colour of purple its womens. The literacy rate in Central Asia was increased and Central-Eastern Europe increase too. The East Asia, Pacific is decreases slightly. Their percentage is 90%. Then the following decreased slightly. The Sub-Saharan Africans mens and womens more illiterate. Than that Central Asians mens and womens. The percentage difference Central Asia the most and Sub-Saharan Africa the least literate area. Sub-Saharan Africans males and females are the literacy the least literate regions people. Central Asia and Central-Eastern Europe is the highest regions literacy rates.
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IELTS academic Literacy rate by region and gender 20111

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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