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Line graph the number of visitors visiting the Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017.

Line graph the number of visitors visiting the Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. 5apPe

The line graph illustrates the number of sightseeing visiting Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, it is clear that the number of visitors increased during this period, and more significantly in the number of them staying on cruise ships. First, In the two First years (2010_2012) having grown to 0. 5 in millions of visitors moderately the number of tourists who were on a cruise ship reached its highest point in this period prior to it decreased to its previous number (0. 25 in millions of visitors). While others who were stayed on the island increased two_fold. In the following years, this trend for bath visitors remained increasing until 2015 in which the number of sightseers who were on cruises ships was 0. 25 in million of tourists lover than the other which reached 1. 5 in millions of sightseers. Besides, the trend, subsequently, reversed on the two last years (2015_2017) during which the number of visitors staying on the cruise ships attained its highest number in all period even higher than others who were on the island which was 0. 5 in millions of tourist more than others (2 in millions of visitors). Accordingly, the total number of visitors experienced massive growth during these seven years which was three times more than the first year.

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