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Line graph of USA, Sweden and Japan for population of 65 years and above

Line graph of USA, Sweden and Japan for population of 65 years and above BLOxj

Over a hundred years period, the USA, Sweden and Japan projected population of citizens beyond 65 years of age and line graph reveals the percentage for each country. Generally, Japan is having its lowest projection between 1960 and 1990 approximately and its highest projection in year 2040 whereas The United States of America and Sweden have similar projection in which their least projection is in year 1940 and the highest would be in year 2040. From 1940 to 2000, Japan population declined by about 2. 5% for first 20 years and remained steady for next two decades, only to begin with a standard rise around the year 1980. On the other hand, American and Swede population made a slight move upwards from 1940 to 1960, and rose for about 9 to 10% with a slight decline from 1980 to about 1990. Future prediction indicate a sudden jump in Japaneses citizens, skyrocketing more than 15%from 2030 to 2040. By 2040 prediction reveals around 27% of the Japaneses population at 65 years or above, while USA and Sweden remains slight lower at about 23 and 24% respectively.

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 of citizens beyond 65 years of age and line graph reveals the percentage for each country.

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