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Line graph description writing task1

Line graph description writing task1 25emJ

The line graph below illustrates the data about the percentages of the people 65age and over between hundred years period in three different countries. It is clearly seen that the most significant rise is expected to be in Japan and the lowest increase is going to be remarked in the USA by 2040. The population aged 65 and over in the USA and Sweden has almost the same growth by 15%, on the contrary the quantity of elderly people decreased gradually in Japan between 1940and 1980. A rise in population remained steadily in the USA nearly 20 years while the number is picked up approximately by 20% in Sweden. Japan had a constant jump to 10proportion. Looking into the future, a dramatic growth is expected to be in Japan among old population about 27% over the next 2030 and 2040 years. But the figures for Sweden and the USA sees upward a slight lower, at 25% and 23% respectively.

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people
 65age and over between Use "a hundred" or use a number before 'hundred'.a hundred
hundred
 years period in three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries. It is clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the most significant rise is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 and the lowest increase is going to be remarked
 in the USA by 2040. The population aged 65 and over in the USA and Sweden has almost the same growth by 15%, on the contrary
 the quantity of elderly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 decreased gradually
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 between 1940and 1980. A rise in population remained steadily
 in the USA nearly
 20 years while the number is picked
 up approximately by 20% in Sweden. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 had a constant jump to 10proportion. Looking into the future, a dramatic growth is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 among This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 population about 27% over the next
 2030 and 2040 years. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the figures for Sweden and the USA This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnesses
sees
 upward a slight lower, at 25% and 23% respectively
. 