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line graph data about visitors

The given line graph illustrates data about tourists choosing Caribbean island over a period of 2010 to 2017. There were given exact numbers of guests who stayed on island and ships. In general, there was a considerable increase in the total number of visitors ranging from 1 to 3. 5 million in the years 2010 and 2017 respectively. The number of visitors stayed on cruise ships showed an upward trend, it rose eightfold from 0. 25 to 2 million reaching the highest point throughout the period given. Despite falling to just approximately 0. 25 million in 2012, the figure then rose gradually over a period of 5 years. On contrast, the number of guests who chose the ships has been always higher than those who stayed on island. However, at the end of the period it fell marginally to just under 1. 5 million. To sum up, overall all figures rose significantly, it means the number of visitors to the island was increased over a seven-year period.

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 of visitors ranging from 1 to 3. 5 million in the years 2010 and 2017 respectively
.

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period
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 of 5 years.

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 of guests who chose the ships has been always higher than those who stayed on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
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. However
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, it means the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of visitors to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
was increased
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period
. 