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line and tables about using camera on the road and people think it s not effective

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The line chart describe about car user who driving too fast and notice by speed camera on the road and a number of people died because of accidents after eight-year periode using otomatic camera. On the other hands, the tables describe about what people’s comment on speed camera in Britain. According to the chart, most people keep broke the law in the road, firstly using camera a number of fines starts from 200. 000 and upward about 50 percent for the next year. In addition, accident on the road still happen. In the first year the number of it almost 3000 and fluctuative over eight years. On the other hands, 60 percent informant believe that camera not decrease the number of accident, and 71 percent people choose that it only using for raise revenue. They also think that too many camera for cought people who break the traffic law, it is about 56 percent. Over all, a number of people should pay for traffic violation slightly upward each year. However a number of road accident seem fluctuative each year. In addition, most people do not think camera on the road not effective and cannot reduce the accident, also cannot develop safety on the road, they guess that the aim of using camera just for earn more money.
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died
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accidents
after eight-year
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. On the other hands, the tables
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in Britain.

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people
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broke the law in the
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over eight years.

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choose that it
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using for raise revenue. They
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not effective and cannot
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IELTS academic line and tables about using camera on the road and people think it s not effective

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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