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Comparison The Pie chart and The table chart

Comparison The Pie chart and The table chart VPMD6

The pie chart shows the prportion of college students who go to sporting events at the same time the table compares students attendance that events based on gender. There are five hundred students taking part in the survey. Units are represented in percentage. The pie chart argue that the majority of students being surveyed do not go to sporting events. Of a total five hundred students that participate in the survey, only one-fifth attend sporting events. The data also shows that there are more male students attending sporting events, many of whom watch football match. From the total fifty seven male participants, nearly 34 of them watch football. Basketball is the second most favorite sporting events attended number of male pasrticipants. As for the female population more than a half watch tennis match. Basketball also becomes the second most favorite sporting event for females, attended by 10 individuals. Unlike their male counterpart, females do not like watching football, except for one person.

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shows
 the Possible spelling mistake found.proportionpr portion
prportion
 of college You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 who go to sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 at the same time the table compares You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 attendance that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 based on gender. There are five hundred You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 taking part in the survey. Units are represented
 in percentage.

The pie chart argue that the majority of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
being surveyed
 do not go to sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
. Of a total five hundred You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 that participate in the survey, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one-fifth attend sporting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
.

The data also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that there are more male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 attending sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of whom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 football match. From the total This word is normally spelled with hyphen.fifty-seven
fifty seven
 male participants, nearly
 34 of them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 football. Basketball is the second most favorite sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 attended number of male Possible spelling mistake found.participants
pasrticipants
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 for the female population more than a half This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 tennis match. Basketball also
 becomes the second most favorite sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 for females, attended by 10 individuals. Unlike their male counterpart, females do not like watching football, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 one person. 