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This bar chart show thereprocessing figure of four waste

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The bar chart provides information about reprocessing figure of four waste substance in a city between 1992 and 2002. From an overall perspective, the recycling rates followed a increasing trend over time for every materials. According to the chart, Firstly waste materials of glass were recycling around 15% in 1932, this rate increasing dramatically over time and reached at more than three times of initial rate which accounts for 50% that is highest among all the substance in all times. Secondly, the waste materials of papers also rose dramatically which stood at 40% in 2002 where this rate was around 13% in beginning. Thirdly, around 8% cans were reproduced in 1992, this rate increased over the times and reached at near 20% in 1997. Furthermore, this rate rose gradually and stood at sharp 20% in 2002. Finally plastic waste materials were recycled 10% in 1992 and this rate rose slightly reached at maximum which accounts for around 12% which did not change until 2002.
The bar chart provides information about reprocessing figure of four
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substance in a city between 1992 and 2002. From an
overall
perspective, the recycling
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rates
followed
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a
increasing trend over
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time
for every
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materials
. According to the chart,
Firstly
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waste
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materials
of glass were recycling
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around
15% in 1932, this
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rate
increasing
dramatically
over
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time
and reached at more than three
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times
of initial
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rate
which accounts for 50%
that is
highest among all the substance in all
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times
.
Secondly
, the
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waste
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materials
of papers
also
rose
dramatically
which stood at 40% in 2002 where this
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rate
was
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around
13% in beginning.
Thirdly
,
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around
8% cans
were reproduced
in 1992, this
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rate
increased over the
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times
and reached at near 20% in 1997.
Furthermore
, this
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rate
rose
gradually
and stood at sharp 20% in 2002.
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Finally
plastic
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materials
were recycled
10% in 1992 and this
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rate
rose
slightly
reached at maximum which accounts for
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around
12% which did not
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until 2002.
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