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In the past, there was the shortage of entertaining and other such things, but now trends are changed and more people are interested in cinema, every second child want to be an actor or an actress, and there are many who opening big businesses. Businessmen and famous people are usually spent a lot of time in social media and probably this is the main reason of why people are concerned that jobs of company bosses or film stars are easier and out of importance. I believe that film actors or entrepreneurs are as important as any other kind of employers like doctors or teachers. Each of them has it is own importance, and I think that they should be paid equally. According to some people qualifications has long been used as a yardstick for paying people, but it is not a consistently good measure. Another is years of experience, but there are many cases where a younger person can perform a task better than someone with lots of experience. Moreover, in my view there is no criteria that could be used to decide how much people should be paid for their work. This will create pressure in other areas.
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IELTS academic criteria to assess salaries

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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