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Language that 13 years students in one school chose to study

Language that 13 years students in one school chose to study lLXVK

the line graph gives information about the 13-year-old students selected to study between French and Mandarin languages from 2000 to present in England. overall, it can be concluded that there has been a significant rise in the number of students who has chosen Mandarin language but still French language is more popular than Mandarin language over the period. according to the data, in 2000, only about 7 students choos French language at the same year. from 2000 to 2005, french fell considerably but Mandarin rose sharply dramatically and reached a peak under 80 students. Since 2005, in the both of figures have not changed as much. as we can see, in the next following tear, from 2006 to present, bothe of trends had fluctuated but there was a slight decline in French language, how ever Mandarin has increased in popularity during this time.

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