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The bar chart shows the information comparing the percentage of household spending in a number of different areas. In 1955 the housing level going to 33. But it's good. In 1985 year the householding dicrease to 24 level it's not good for results down up to 13 level. It is very discrease to country. The next present it is electricity and water. We know the in 1900-1999 takes more electricity and water it not will be easy. But 2000 starts it will be easy but didn't in our country because in our country villages often didn't have electricity and water too. In1955 years peoples spend 18 procentse spended water and electricity. But in the year to year in1985 years people spends 22 level it's more then 1955 year. The 2015 years we know it's developing year. In this year we can see peoples takes more then all years. Food and education is too important and peesentagly. Education more spend then food in all three days that's more. Holidays entertainment it was too important. In 1955 and 2015 entertainment his hand frowned then holidays. That's of all for my bar chart

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