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The given flowchart describes how ceramic pots are manufactured from scatch.

The given flowchart describes how ceramic pots are manufactured from scatch. G31DB

The picture shows that how ceramic pots are produced by looking one image and that is illustrated by flowchart. Overall, it is clearly noticeable that there are many different steps to complete the process of making pots. The manufacturing process is starting with raw materials and ending with colour firing. To begin with, at the initial level raw materials are collected by machine(JCB). Then, that materials are loaded on the truck for the transportation purpose and it is directly sent to the factory. Before, it is taken for the mixing, they are perfectly crushed in the crusher machine. After that, moulding process is started and it is done in particular shape which seems like man-made mould. Next, that moulds are put for drying and they are put on time basis around 4-6 hours. Following this, clay pots are assembled after that it is put into oven on 1000 degrees Celsius for their strength. next step is pots are coloured and they are locked under colour firing machine for a while. Finally, product of clay pots is ready to use.

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shows
 that how ceramic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are produced
 by looking one image and that is illustrated
 by flowchart.

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, it is clearly
 noticeable that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 steps to complete the process of making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
. The manufacturing process is starting with raw materials and ending with Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 firing.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, at the initial level raw materials are collected
 by machine(JCB). Then, that materials are loaded
 on the truck for the transportation purpose and it is directly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the factory. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
, it is taken
 for the mixing, they are perfectly
 crushed in the crusher machine.

After that, Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
 process is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 and it is done
in particular
 shape which seems like This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
. Next
, that Possible spelling mistake. 'moulds' is British English.molds
moulds
are put
 for Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).drying, and
drying and
 they are put
 on time basis around 4-6 hours. Following this, clay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
are assembled
 after that it is put
 into oven on 1000 degrees Celsius for their strength. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNext
next
 step is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
 are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).coloured, and
coloured and
 they are locked
 under Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 firing machine for a while. Finally
, product of clay You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjugcupbucketurnkettlebowl
pots
 is ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 