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The bar chart illustrates the costs of houses in major cities in five countries from 1989 to 2002.

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The bar chart illustrates the costs of houses in major cities in five countries from 1989 to 2002. Overall, there are downward trends in the figures for Frankfurt, while that number of the other cities tended to be upward. Additionally, the most significant changes fell into both London and New York over the examined period. Looking more closely, houses in Frankfurt attracted a lot of homebuyers so the quantity of cost in Frankfurt was higher than any other figures at the beginning. Afterward, house prices in that city dropped by around 2 percent in the following years and expressly decreased to third place in the year 2002. By contrast, over the 13-year period witnessed a dramatic increase for 4 times and reached at 12 percent in house price’s value in London, overtaking that of the others and ranked first place, followed by New York after the quantity in that city skyrocketed by about 10 percent between 1990 and 2002. Meanwhile, the figures in Marid city only rose from 2 to 5 units throughout the entire period. Similarly, the cost of an average home in Tokyo mildly grew for probably 4 percent but maintained the lowest price.
The bar chart illustrates the costs of
houses
in major
cities
in five countries from 1989 to 2002.
Overall
, there are downward trends in the figures for Frankfurt, while that number of the other
cities
tended to be upward.
Additionally
, the most significant
changes
fell into both London and New York over the examined period.

Looking more
closely
,
houses
in Frankfurt attracted
a lot of
homebuyers
so
the quantity of cost in Frankfurt was higher than any other figures at the beginning. Afterward,
house
prices in that city dropped by around 2
percent
in the following years and
expressly
decreased to third place in the year 2002.

By contrast, over the 13-year period witnessed a dramatic increase for 4 times and reached at 12
percent
in
house
price’s value in London, overtaking that of the others and ranked
first
place, followed by New York after the quantity in that city skyrocketed by about 10
percent
between 1990 and 2002. Meanwhile, the figures in
Marid
city
only
rose from 2 to 5 units throughout the entire period.
Similarly
, the cost of an average home in Tokyo
mildly
grew for
probably
4
percent
but
maintained the lowest price.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the costs of houses in major cities in five countries from 1989 to 2002.

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196 words
6.5
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