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foreign homestay tourists - Can Tho, Jan-May, 2009

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From January to May 2009, the graph shows the number of foreign homestay tourists in Can Tho. Over the course of five months, the figure has dropped dramatically. The number of foreign homestay tourists began at 600 in January 2009 and steadily increased until reaching 680 in the second month of the same year. Following that, it remained stable for the next three months before plummeting to only 200 by the end of May.
From January to May 2009, the graph
shows
the number of foreign homestay tourists in Can Tho.

Over the course of five months, the figure has dropped
dramatically
.

The number of foreign homestay tourists began at 600 in January 2009 and
steadily
increased until reaching 680 in the second month of the same year. Following that, it remained stable for the
next
three months
before
plummeting to
only
200 by the
end
of May.
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IELTS academic foreign homestay tourists - Can Tho, Jan-May, 2009

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
74 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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