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Graphs illustrates isits abroad by UK residents by purpose of visit between 1994 and 1998

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The line graph and table illustrate how many visits abroad by UK residents by cause of visit for 3 areas between 1994 to 1998. Overall, in each of these year, visits abroad by English persons by cause of Holiday increased year by year. It is also shown by chart that travels to Western Europe were highest level than North America and Other Areas combined. With regards to the table, it can be seen that, travels with Holiday and Business raised with biggest percentage year by year, so on conclusion travels to another countries noticeable increased from 22072 to 28828 by purpose of increasing almost each cause of visits. Turning to the chart, every year the biggest figure was only on visits to Western Europe, even other two figure’s level add together too. The second higher proportion than North America was Other areas from 1994 to 1998.

The line graph and table illustrate how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visits
 abroad by UK residents by cause of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visit
 for 3 areas Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1994 and 1998".between 1994 and 1998
between 1994 to 1998
.

Overall
, in each of these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visits
 abroad by English persons by cause of Holiday increased You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. It is also
 shown by chart that travels to Western Europe were A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
highest
 level than North America and Other Areas combined.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 the table, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, travels with Holiday and Business raised with A determiner is probably missing here: "the biggest".the biggest
biggest
 percentage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on conclusion travels to another countries noticeable increased from 22072 to 28828 by purpose of increasing almost each cause of visits.

Turning to the chart, every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 the biggest figure was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visits
 to Western Europe, even other two Possible agreement error. The noun 'figure' seems to be countable, so consider using: "figures".figures
figure
’s level This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 together too. The second higher proportion than North America was Other areas from 1994 to 1998. 