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The two graphs illustrate that the overseas enrolment students and the regional students who are study around ten years in an Australian university. Looking at the first graph in more detail, it is evident that the Australian university's students studies who are coming from other countries from 2001 to 2010. In 2001, the total number of students was 2000, where the connecting students were only around 1200. Connecting students and total students both are increasing every year, and we can see a large number of differences between them in the first year (2001) to the last year (2010). The second graph shows that connecting students and total students have long differences a decade from 2001 to 2010. The connecting students dramatically increase in 2002. However, after the four years continuously decreasing, although the total number of learners growing every year. It is noticeable that in the last four years (2007-2010, the totals of local students are stable, and the connecting students in the last three years (2008-2010) again follow to decrease path. Overall, in other countries, scholars are more connected as compared to the regional country's students.

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