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Given in the line graph is the changes in the population of NZ within a timespan of 100 years commencing from 1950 and predictions/ projections by 2050. As can be inferred from the graph, the 0-14s show an upward progression, whereas their 25-37-year-old counterparts declined. Meanwhile, a volatile trend is seen in the 38-45 and 65+ age brackets. Another key feature is that the majority of the NZ population are over 65 years old. At the outset of the survey, about 5% of NZ citizens were 0-14 years old. This figure reaches precisely 20% by the end. Conversely, the rate of the 25-37s displays a downtrend, with figures dwindling from north of 20% to the vicinity of 2% throughout the period. In 1950, people aged 65+ accounted for slightly more than 60% in NZ, after which this rate rose to 70% before being predicted to decline to 65% by 2050. Somewhat similar is the rate of the 38-45s: initially, it almost doubled from about 25%, followed by a reduction of nearly 10% prior to being forecast to remain unchanged into the future.

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changes
 in the population of NZ within a Possible spelling mistake found.time spantimes pan
timespan
 of 100 years commencing from 1950 and predictions/ projections by 2050.

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show
 an upward progression, whereas their 25-37-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 counterparts declined. Meanwhile, a volatile trend is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the 38-45 and 65+ age brackets. Another key feature is that the majority of the NZ population are over 65 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
.

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old
. This figure reaches precisely
 20% by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. Conversely
, the rate of the 25-37s displays a downtrend, with figures dwindling from north of 20% to the vicinity of 2% throughout the period.

In 1950, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 aged 65+ accounted for slightly
 more than 60% in NZ, after which this rate rose to 70% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being predicted
 to decline to 65% by 2050. Somewhat similar is the rate of the 38-45s: initially
, it almost doubled from about 25%, followed by a reduction of nearly
 10% prior to being forecast to remain unchanged into the future. 